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The End of One Journey, the Beginning of the Next
24th Installment of Adelaide’s Secret
By C. Jane Reid
Carissa: I have to get Elsie finished. This blasted opening scene is killing me. I've been over it four times now, and it is only just coming together.
Laurinda: Maybe run it by your editor if you are still stuck?
Carissa: If I had an editor.
Carissa: I think I have it figured out. Needed to change point of view.
And so it went. Half of December was spent plotting and researching the new story line for Elsie’s Tale. All of January and into February was for writing whenever I could—mornings before the kids were up, during the day between errands and volunteering, and evenings after the family was in bed. The house suffered from neglect and the family suffered meals of frozen and boxed food as I became more and more of a hermit to get the story finished on time.
By the second week in February, I’d completed a story of over 54,000 words, the longest kit club book yet, but my work wasn’t finished. I dove into editing, trying to clean up the story as much as I could over the next two weeks before the deadline for proofreading.
I sent the manuscript off at the last hour, and I sighed a huge sigh of relief. I’d done it. I finished the story in time. The kit club wasn’t going to die because I hadn’t spent enough time researching the story and getting to know the character before writing. I knew the story had some rough spots, and it hadn’t gone through as many beta readers as Ailee’s parts, only Laurinda, Adelaide, and my mom, but I was proud of the story nevertheless. I’d worked my tail off and I’d met my goal. I was ready for a long, long rest.
Only I had another story to write. And I had just three months to develop, research, plot, write, and edit the thing.
What had I gotten myself into?
And then there was Adelaide, sending me weekly text messages to ask about the Guthrie research. I’d put her off as long as I’d dared. When I received the next text from her just after ordering copies of Elsie’s Tale for the Spring 2016 kit, I dreaded reading it. But I was glad I did.
Adelaide: Forgot to say how much I liked the story about Elsie when I sent you those notes back.
Me: You did? Oh, that is a relief. She was a struggle to write. I should have a copy of the book for you in about two weeks.
Adelaide: Bring it out when you have it. I’ll be at the farm. Lambs coming. You don’t want to miss them. And bring what you have on the Guthries.
I hesitated when I read that last. I considered my words carefully.
]Me: I haven’t gotten as far as I’d like on that research. Is it possible you could tell me a little more of what you might know about the family? Any histories or stories?
I didn’t get a response until the next day, which meant I spent the night fretting that I’d said the wrong thing and Adelaide was angry with me. I never quite knew which way she’d go lately.
But finally, as I was waiting for my son to get out of school, my phone chimed. I used to like the chime it made, like the double ring of a buoy bell. Lately, I winced in dread. But I read the text at once.
Adelaide: Dad didn’t speak about it to me but once. Said his family had an old grudge against Mom’s side. Said the bad blood went back generations. He didn’t know how it started. Might be a clue in the binder.
The binder. Of course. How could I have forgotten to look there?
The phone chimed again.
Adelaide: Dad said he believed the Guthries came from the same place as Mom’s family.
I frowned at the phone and tapped in a response.
Me: The same place like Ailee? Ireland? Pennsylvania?
Adelaide: He never said.
And that was the last I heard, but it was more than I’d had. I was distracted for the rest of the evening, much to the annoyance of my family who were ready for me to return to non-writing life, so I made an effort to be in the present and not turning over what I might find.
Finally, I had a chance to pull out the binder. The house was quite, the family all in bed for the night. I opened the binder on the dining table and set my mug of Irish Breakfast tea close at hand. It was going to be a long night.
(to be continued)
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